Wednesday, April 16, 2008

alone in a crowded room

Alone in a crowded room

Voices all around
Too muffled to distinguish a single sound

People come and go
Can they see me, I do not think so

How can this be
When there are so many surrounding me

Should I drink
No, I must be able to think

Why can’t I be seen
What does this mean

Tears stream down my face
I have to get out of this place

© 2008 Bernice Burks


  1. u should work on a book of verse while u are at it

  2. three at the same time? people will start calling me "Ms. Hustler"

  3. Can't tell you how many times i've felt this way...that's when i fade to dark. Nice piece.

  4. mizrepresent, thanks. i feel a little like that now.
    nice that your dropped by.

  5. @eb the celeb: it was one of those days...


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